Colleen gave us some great advice for our poetry writing this week. She gave us this:
Thank you, Colleen, I have attempted to do as you asked.
I watch sadly from the wings
As our world wrestles with pain
Blow after blow falls
While those charged with informing
Give voice to misleading facts
You can have a go at this by following this link to Colleen’s challenge: https://colleenchesebro.com/2017/09/12/colleens-weekly-poetry-challenge-no-50-haiku-tanka-haibun-voice-watch/
Happy Sunday everyone!
Robbie and Michael Cheadle are the co-authors of the Sir Chocolate Book series and Robbie Cheadle is the author of Silly Willy goes to Cape Town
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Excellent. Captures exactly what I think a lot of people are feeling right now
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Thank you, Tandy.
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Great poem, the unfortunate direction of where the world is going!
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Thank you, Miriam.
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You’re welcome. I appreciate your sensitivity!
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Great poem.. really powerful especially the last line
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Thank you, Bella.
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A very telling, and powerful poem Robbie 🙂
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Thank you, Ritu. It is a very difficult time right now in the world.
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It is but we can brighten the days a little xx
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Very apt right now my darling x
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I thought so too, Shey.
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A very heartfelt poem, Robbie. The world is in a terrible state at the moment.
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Thank you, Judy.
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You are welcome Robbie. I hope things are continuing to improve for you .
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Today will be tough as we pick up the pieces at work and move on. We have lost nine partners in our firm and two of them were my direct bosses (not through death, the story about KPMG SA was on Sky News and BBC). It has been a purging of note and the staff are like lost lambs.
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You may embody the ‘courage in what you write’ attitude. How many authors co-write with their children. If I’m honest, I’m a big envious of that!
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Thank you, Jacqui. Co-writing with Michael is fantastic. Children never have writers block and come up with great ideas in ice-cream parlours.
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You speak to many hearts and minds with this.
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Thank you, Annette. I am so glad, we need to share our thoughts and try and make chance happen in our small ways.
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Excellent poem Robbie.. It is indeed so sad, that so many are in pain while there are still so many misleading facts that complicate issues in peoples lives..
A problem, throughout the world.. ❤
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You are right, Sue. Fake news is sadly a very big fact of our modern life. Have a wonderful week, my friend.
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I will, you too, hopefully with not too much stress.. ❤
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Beautiful Tanka poem, Robbie. Your words have rung clear for me. Our world is a mess and us Americans have a President who should shut up! There… I went out of my comfort zone too! LOL! Hugs to you my friend. It’s bad times for all of us. ❤
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Thank you for your kind words of praise, Colleen. There is a lot going on in the world right now. Looking forward to reading yours. Hugs.
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I appreciate the challenge she provided. I think I will continue to mull it over for myself.
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Colleen is a very thoughtful person and a great poet. I am learning so much from her.
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Great handling o this Robbie with a brilliant punchline ( I had a computer crash a few days ago and still sorting it out. though I like stuff it never seems to register, so If you don’t see my ticking your like box (like the cheese cake recipe) don’t think I’m being sniffy. If you do see I’ve liked then let me know because I cannot see that it has registered. And I have to log in every time I go into someone word press even though I;m logged in! GRRR! Thanks Paul)
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Oh no, Paul, that is so annoying. Outlook decided to put all my blog emails into junk email today for some reason. Technology – bah!
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Hi Paul, the likes didn’t show I am afraid.
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HI Robbie Thank you for telling me about the likes. 1stly Smorgasbord and Chris went into junk yesterday about midnight last night. Today I am getting no notifications even in Junk! Zilch! 2ndly I have just signed into your blog… it makes me sign in every time to leave a comment.. and the two above ‘liked by you’ on your last 2 comment now work. I believed it was my firefox settings but if you had the same trouble might be something bigger like an ill conceived update- which means it will sort itself out and its not specifically a problem with my post crash! Thanks Px
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A powerful, timely piece, Robbie! Thanks for sharing. 🙂
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