Robbie’s Inspiration – Tanka Tuesday and W3 Prompt 104 #poetry

The following two poems are written for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday prompt. You can join in here: https://tankatuesday.com/2024/04/23/24-seasons-syllabic-poetry-challenge-no-31-4-23-24-part-i-grain-rain-april-19-may-4-koku-%e7%a9%80%e9%9b%a8/

Crimson Pride (tanka)

Full of boastful pride

Wall exhibited its coat

Pride leads to a fall

Soon its crimson covering

Would be stripped bare of its leaves

Picture caption: A high wall covered with a curtain of crimson leaved creepers

Dancing Clouds (shadorma)

Dancing clouds

Sensational show

Swaying in

Slow dance pairs

Shapely contours silver bright

Pregnant with raindrops

Picture caption: Autumn clouds which should not contain rain, but did.

This next haiku is written for W3 #104.

This is the prompt:

II. Ben’s prompt guidelines

From free verse to haiku…
This 'folly', be up to you!
Can't wait to read how you do.
Your inspiration is 'folly'.

You can join in here: https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/04/24/w3-prompt-104-weave-written-weekly/

Autumn Folly

Nature’s last folly

Temperature’s drop at night

Frost decorates buds

Picture caption: We had a week of cold and rain and now it is unseasonably hot. Certain flowers have come back into bloom.

109 thoughts on “Robbie’s Inspiration – Tanka Tuesday and W3 Prompt 104 #poetry

  1. Mother Nature is certainly playing tricks on us these days, folly is a great description. What are those plants in the first picture, Robbie? Are there animals that eat them?

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      1. Hi is living on a base but I’m don’t know where exactly. I know he goes back to Gaza on Thursday. His uncle and his family live in Israel so he has some family. He did most of his high school at a boarding school in Israel.

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    1. Hi Resa, those flowers are bougainvillea. They are flowering for the second time (they flower in spring and again in autumn). I live in the highveld and out winter weather is generally very pleasant during the day with temperatures of 21C to 23C on average. Our nights are cold and it does drop just below freezing during June and July.

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