It is amazing to me how sometimes a prompt will result in an immediate idea and flow of words. Like a tap being turned on. Other times a bit of effort is required. Occasionally, I find, I just don’t feel inspired and then I leave it. Forced writing is never work that I am ultimately pleased with. Happily, when I saw this divine photograph, this entire poem popped into my head, almost fully formed.
My mind’s eye
I reflect on my life
through my mind’s eye
Inspecting
Seeking
I open secret drawers
rummaging through
their hidden contents.
My childhood
A time of happiness
Innocence
and laughter.
My teenage years
I gently probe
Pulling out memories
Like old clothes
from the cupboard of time.
I run my eye over them
looking for rents,
tears and wrinkles.
Choices that impacted
on the elastic band of my life
liked pulled threads.
My eye moves on
My early twenties
Books, university and classes,
career decisions,
boyfriends and jobs.
Time then seemed stretched
Passing slowly
Each moment full and rich.
My wedding
A wonderful day
Happiness so evident
It lies like a fog blanket
over these memories.
Buying our home,
Building our careers,
and then
our babies
those perfect little beings.
Time speeds up
the elastic band
pulls tight
almost seeming to double back on itself.
I close my mind’s eye
A sigh of relief escapes my lips
There is nothing I would change
Everything is as it should be.
by Robbie Cheadle
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This freestyle poem was inspired by the photo prompt provided by Sue Vincent. You can join in here: https://scvincent.com/2017/11/02/thursday-photo-prompt-eye-writephoto/.
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Robbie and Michael Cheadle are the co-authors of the Sir Chocolate Book series and Robbie Cheadle is the author of Silly Willy goes to Cape Town
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Beautiful, Robbie.
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Thank you, Patricia. I have a lot to be grateful for.
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Wonderfully free wheeling Robbie. The elastic band is a great metaphor!
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Thank you so much, Susan. I am pleased you liked it.
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Absolutely stunning words, Robbie for such a great picture and so agree with your words that sometimes seeing a pictures can opens vistas for us.
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Thank you, Kamal. I am glad you enjoyed this poem.
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Yes absolutely Robbie.
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I love it Robbie, and the fact you used ‘reflect in the first few lines… it really pulls the Image further into your words!
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Thank you, Ritu. I appreciate your comment.
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🙂
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Lovely, Robbie… and I agree, everything is always just as it should be.
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Thank you, Sue. Your picture made me think how lucky I am to have such a lovely life.
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Then I am very glad I chose this one 🙂
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Terrific interpretation of reflection Robbie.. hugs
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I am thrilled you liked this, Sally.
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A full life and a satisfying ending. Nicely done Robbie.
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Thank you, Iain.
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Reblogged this on Die Erste Eslarner Zeitung – Aus und über Eslarn, sowie die bayerisch-tschechische Region!.
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Thank you, Michael. Your shares are always appreciated. Have a lovely weekend.
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Thank you, Robbie! Best wishes for the weekend also to you. 😉 Michael
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What a beautiful approach to reflecting on one’s life. Wonderfully done, Robbie!
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Thank you so much, Mae. Hugs.
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Very clever Robbie. Well thought out and so much covered from that image. Also a great choice from that image.x
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Thank you, Shey. I was lucky with this one. The idea and words just came so easily.
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The best writing is xxxxxx
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A lovely poem Robbie. I am so glad you are content. Have a lovely weekend.
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Thank you, Kim. I am fortunate. I hope that you also have a lovely weekend.
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I’m completely distracted by how gorgeous that picture is. How would a photographer ever catch that still, glasslike water? I can see easy ways to do it in, say, Photoshop, but this looks so real.
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I found this photograph very inspiring, Jacqui.
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Your reflections about your life bring out each moment so vividly as if a friend is talking to me. Thanks for sharing Robbie. Stay blessed!
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Thank you, Balroop. That is a lovely comment. Have a lovely weekend and you too stay blessed.
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Good one, Robbie.
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Thank you, John
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Beautiful, Robbie. ❤
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Thank you, Bette.
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summed it up so beautifully… your life and how much you appreciate each and every moment. ❤
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Yes, I do appreciate my life, Annette. Thank you.
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So well done, Robbie💖
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Thank you, Amy.
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A beautiful reflection, Robbie, literally!
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I am glad you liked this poem, Terri. Have a lovely weekend.
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Well done, Robbie. It invokes so many images. Hugs.
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Thank you, Teagan. I hope your writing is going well.
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Thanks. I was not able to even start until yesterday (work). So I have a lot of catching up to do. Hugs
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A wonderful little snapshot into your life Robbie. 🙂
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Thank you, Debby.
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I so agree about the prompts Robbie. Sometimes words just flow and sometimes its almost like you hit the dead end. Beautiful pic and the poem is sweetly grateful.
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Thank you, Smitha. I have decided not to push if the idea and words don’t come easily. I just wait for something that does push the right buttons. Have a lovely day.
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Thank you Robbie. Have a lovely weekend.
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It’s always a good sign to feel like you are exactly where you are meant to be.
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Thank you, Tandy. Sometimes it almost feels as if decision are made for you.
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Thoroughly enjoyed your poem Robbie, your life through that magnificent photo. So wonderful. Have a great weekend.
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Thank you, Lynne.
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Oh my goodness! I love, LOVE this poem. ❤️
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Thank you so much, Jennie. You have made my day.
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My pleasure, Robbie. Why is it that sometimes after reading something so wonderful, all the words in the world vanish? Only feelings remain. That’s what happened. You made my day. 🙂
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My pleasure, Robbie. Why is it that after reading something wonderful, words vanish and only feelings remain? That’s what happened. You made my day. ❤️
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Stunning poetry, Robbie. What a beautiful and moving reflection on your journey. I need a tissue. ❤
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Thank you, Diana. I am very flattered.
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It’s wonderful. ❤
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A lovely, positive view of your life. It is good to write such affirmations down.
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Thank you, Frank. I agree it is good to write positive thoughts down and celebrate them.
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A beautiful summary of a blessed life. You are so inspiring.
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Thank you, Susan. That is very kind of you.
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Lovely Robbie!
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I am glad you enjoyed this, Penny.
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Perfect, beautiful – loved it, Robbie!
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Thank you, Teri.
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A powerful piece of recollection!
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Thank you!
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What a lovely poem! Stories pop into my head sometimes, too, and I always enjoy the effortless flow of words. Times like that feel like a pure gift. 🙂
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Yes they do, thank you Cathleen.
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