Vocal is running a poetry challenge with the theme of Uncommon – write a poem about something rare. I wasn’t going to participate as I couldn’t think of anything I fancied writing about until yesterday when I discovered Eleanor, the hadeda, had come into my office for a visit.
I thought that was quite rare, I’ve never had a hadeda come inside before and I’ve lived in my current home near a bird sanctuary for nearly 20 years.
These are the pictures that inspired my poem, The Visitor. You can read the poem on Vocal and if you have a few extra minutes you can register on the site and leave a like and/or comment for me. Or you can just leave a comment here.
You will find my poem here: https://vocal.media/poets/the-visitor-8hphqb0xd1



This is my haiku for Colleen Chesebro’s latest poetry challenge. I thought the lady depicted in the picture looked like she had a title or position of some sort and was born privileged. My poem is about the lack of permanency of titles and position.

Titles are not owned
Merely temporary gifts
Easily transferred
By Robbie Cheadle
You can join in Colleen’s challenge here: https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2023/01/24/tankatuesday-ekphrastic-poetry-challenge-no-304/
Well done, Robbie. Shared on Twitter for you.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thanks, Pete.
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This is a wonderful senryū, Robbie. It’s the tone of the poem, that grabbed me… this woman definitely has some secrets, doesn’t she? You pick up on that perfectly!
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Hi Colleen, a few of the poets saw something secretive about this woman. A great picture.
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I think it’s in her stance and the way she’s looking off into the distance that really gave me the impression there was more going on then meets the eye. Also, she’s wearing red, as if looking for attention. (Not that everyone who wears red is seeking attention). I looked up the color psychology of red, for that observation.
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Hi Colleen, that assessment of the colour red is generally true. It is the same with red cars and insurers charge more to insure a red car than other colours. I only wear red if I am on the war path and then it is very deliberate.
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Yes! I don’t wear red often either. It’s a “dangerous” color, that’s for sure.
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Hi Robbie,
I like the name Eleanor. She is such a friendly bird. You got her trust and it is reflected in your poem.
Good job!
Shalom aleichem
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Hi Pat, thank you. She is such a sweet girl and I’m glad you enjoyed this poem.
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I love your poems. That is one cool bird. You seem to connect well with birds. How fun to have one come inside and visit you.
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Hi Darlene, Eleanor goes into my dad’s office fairly often. It is not unusual to find her and both cats there with him. This is the first time she’s come right into the house. I think all creatures know when they are loved.
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They do!
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❤ The poetry, the bird… ❤
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Thanks, Annette. A look on the brighter side of life 💗
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I love how you took an inspiration like this and turned it into art!
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Thank you, John. I thought it was an unusual and uplifting experience.
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she looks like she could write a poem with that long beak of hers.
All wildlife is poetry.
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Hi Wayne, I agree. Eleanor does have a long beak but she is a very sweet and gentle creature.
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Oh that must be such a treat to have her around!
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Wonderful poem, Robbie!
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Thanks, Jill. I know you also like birds 💗
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I do! Sadly, Donald hasn’t been coming around lately. We see her swimming in the lake, so we know she’s safe.
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Maybe she’s found a mate.
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Eleanor could pick your poem to pieces with that long beak. Instead, she is nodding her appreciation. Well done, Robbie. So many times birds or a brilliant sky have inspired a haiku for me.
About the titled lady. Yes, titles are temporary. Just ask Prince Harry and Meghan. I believe the Crown has dropped their HRH specification.
Thanks for this beautiful post, Robbie. I’m glad I could also see a sliver of your studio, where your magic is created. 😀
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Hi Marian I am also very fond of birds and I thought Eleanor’s visit qualified as unusual. The whole situation with the royal family currently is very upsetting. Very unsuited to all parties status as influencers of society. My office is rather untidy so I tend not to take pictures of it 😂
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My office is VERY untidy now, just having sent off a book manuscript. While the desktop is usable, I cringe at the many piles on the floor. Will work on the cleanup slowly. 😀
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I love that you have somewhat bonded with Eleanor. Cute poem you created for her. I also love your ekphrasitic poem for Colleen. Well done!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks, Yvette, I’m glad you enjoyed these
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I got a big kick out of “The Visitor.” When I first saw the photos, I did wonder if she had left you any “gifts” of a scatalogical nature. You haiku is very insightful. I think the same holds true for fame.
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Hi Liz, I’m glad you enjoyed my poem. Quite an unexpected treat. I agree that game is also temporary and often linked to youth.
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Thank you for the introduction to Vocal, Robbie. It was great fun viewing the poets/poetry. It is a place that has many marvelous rabbit holes. I have been very interested in how many stories have come from The Lady of the Snows by George Henry Boughton. Lover you thought.
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Hi Rebecca, I haven’t spent much time on vocal yet. It’s quite chaotic for me at the moment as I’m doing all the school runs and other stuff. I hope to visit and read more there soon.
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Hi Robbie – I’ve been curious about your visitor ever since I saw your post on Instagram. That’s quite a big bird to have in your house and I would think a little unnerving to see it from its perch on top of your cabinet! What type of personality does a hadeda have? Very nice haiku too 🙂
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Hi Barbara, Eleanor is very sweet and she has always lived in our garden. She is the fourth generation of hadedas to be born in the same tree and they have all footages in our garden but she is the most friendly. She never leaves and seems content to stay here. She often goes into my dad’s office which is outside but it was a surprise to see her in my office as it’s quite far from the back door. She was very calm and contented inside.
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That’s amazing – it’s hard for me to imagine that happening here. We often have a lot of Canadian geese in our backyard, but I wouldn’t want one of them in my house!
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I’ve never had a wild bird come inside like this before. She was so calm and collected. If a wild bird comes in by accident they usually panic and start flying into things as they try to escape.
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Yes, I don’t know what you’re set-up is but we’ve had birds in our garage and even with the doors wide open, they often can’t find a way out and panic.
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Yes, that is why this visit was so interesting. Eleanor was perfectly contented and at home.
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What a wonderful experience Robbie! Although not the mess, I imagine.
And that’s an excellent response to Colleen’s ekphrasti prompt. (K)
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Hi Kerfe, both response were a bit out the box, but that’s what came to mind. The mess wasn’t difficult to clean as it was on the wooden floor.
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I’ve never known a hadeda to venture inside. And it looks like she didn’t cause any damage?
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She goes into my dad’s office often but this was the first time she came right into the house. She didn’t cause any damage because she was quite calm and comfortable. She knows Dad and I.
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Interesting view on titles, Robbie.
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Yes, I always get way out ideas for prompts.
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Hi Robbie such a beautiful bird nicely come and occupied your office. A lovely poem too🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Thank you, Kamal. It was a surprise.
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You are always welcome dear Robbie ❤️💗
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So brilliant Robbie – an amazing experience x
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Thanks, Toni. It was unusual.
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lovely take. 🙂
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Thank you
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🙂
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Your poem is lovely and so is Eleanor!
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Thank you, Kymber. I’m lucky to live near a bird sanctuary and we get a lot of feathered visitors.
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A lovely poem for a lovely visit. Have hearted and tweeted from Vocal.
The Tanka Tuesday poem is so true.
Well done, Robbie 💕🙂
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Hi Harmony, thank you. I need to spend a bit of time exploring vocal further. Thanks for introducing me to it.
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I’m so happy to have introduced you, Robbie! 💖
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What a lovely visitor! It was natural to write a poem in its honor. Well-done Robbie.
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Hi Balroop, I am pleased Eleanor visited and I had this inspiration. It is good to write about happy events sometimes.
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Reblogged this on Judith Barrow and commented:
Love this!!
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Thank you, Judith. I’m glad you enjoyed meeting Eleanor.
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That bird is incredible and so is your relationship with her, Robbie. I’m sure she can feel your love and compassion for all animals. My sister would love her! She has 4 huge parrots and they’ve been with her forever. She is truly a bird lover. 🙂 Delightful poem about your visitor and a wonderful response to the painting.
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Hi Lauren, Eleanor has a sweet and calm nature. She is no trouble when she ventures into my dad’s office (which is outside). This is the first time she’s come right into the house and she was very comfortable as you can see. No fear at all. I have always had an affinity for birds and small creatures.
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Love the thought behind titles, Robbie! What a fun vistor. I will head over to vocal.
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Thank you, Denise, Eleanor is adorable and I enjoy having her around.
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That bird is adorable!
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I love Eleanor!
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Oh I loved both poems Robbie. I tried to sign in but I couldn’t. What a delightful gift with that beautiful bird visiting and your interlude and cute conversation with him! I loved it!
Your poem for Colleen was so good and on the money.
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HI Cindy, I’m glad you enjoyed the poems. Signing into these sites is a bit of a nuisance and I don’t always do it either (or can’t do it for some or other reason). I struggle with Spillwords sometimes.
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Oh Robbie, I did love them and you are so right about that. I think I’m done asking people to vote for things until the next time I ask😂😂😂 I loved your poems!!!❤️
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I do like this poem Robbie you are so right also titled and privileges need to be earned ! I am off now to read about your visitor.💜
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Your poem about your hadeda visitor was adorable, Robbie. What a talker. Lol. How fun to have such a cheeky visitor to your garden. The mess in the house… not so much. And a lovely poem for Colleen’s prompt. She does look quite privileged. 🙂
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What a fabulous visitor, Robbie. Thanks for the photos and for sharing your poems. ♥
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Hi Olga, I’m glad you enjoyed these poems.
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Truth is beautifully captured in your poem. Excellent, Robbie.
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Thank you, Gwen. People really don’t understand that positions and titles are temporary, particularly in the work place. As soon as you leave / retire, someone else takes your place. It’s about the position in many ways and not the person filling the position.
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What a unique and inspiring subject for your poem! The unexpected visit from the hadeda must have been a special moment and it’s great to see you capture it in your writing. Your poem, “The Visitor,” perfectly captures the rarity and beauty of this experience. I’ve already read it and it was truly a joy to read. Keep up the amazing work and thank you for sharing your talent with us!
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Thank you, I am so pleased you enjoyed this poem written through the eyes of Eleanor the Hadeda.
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It was my pleasure! The poem was beautifully written and capturing the essence of Eleanor the Hadeda was truly inspiring. Keep up the great work!
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Excellent poem, Robbie.
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Thanks, Jeff
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You’re most welcome, Robbie.
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Indeed. easily transfered.
Is a hadeda an ibis?
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Yes, that is correct.
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Interesting. I’d never heard the name hadeda… Where does it come from?
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Hi Robbie, this is wonderful!
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Thank you, Charles 💖
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