The bright reflection
Grasps the heartbeat of the sun
Sharing it with all
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Shadows spread darkness
Absorbing the bright daylight
Hiding its warm joy
Distorting reality
Into elongated shapes
Ideas on writing and baking
The bright reflection
Grasps the heartbeat of the sun
Sharing it with all
***
Shadows spread darkness
Absorbing the bright daylight
Hiding its warm joy
Distorting reality
Into elongated shapes
Very evocative, Robbie. Shared on Twitter.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thank you, Pete 😊
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lovely
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Thank you 💖
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Fantastic, Robbie – and gorgeous images. Toni x
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I’m glad you enjoyed these poems, Toni
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Beautiful, Robbie. I especially like ‘Grasps the heartbeat of the sun’.
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Thank you, Norah 😊
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I like your description of shadows “Absorbing the bright daylight” which is what they do as evening comes.
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Thank you, Frank. I think it seems like that too 💖
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Reblogged this on Ed;s Site..
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Thank you, Ed
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I like your picture poetry (as Frank Prem would call it) very much!
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I am delighted you like these, Liz
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😀
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grasping the heartbeat of the sun–what a wonderful image. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe. I’m so pleased you like that line 😊
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You poem is so visual!
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Thank you, John
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Excellent Poem, Robbie. I loved the line where the reflection grabs the heartbeat of the sun.
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Hi John, I’m really glad you like that line 🤗
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So beautifully composed poem, Robbie. Excellent pictures of lovely reflections.
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Thank you, Kamal. I appreciate your kind comment 💞
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Most welcome dear Robbie ❤️❤️
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Beautiful
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Thank you
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I liked the distorted images. I had never thought of it like that and will this evening.
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Thank you, Elizabeth. I’m always intrigued, when I read comments on poems, how everyone appreciates and relates to different concepts. It is so illustrative of all the variety with people, isn’t it?
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I learned that teaching poetry. Every student found something different in each poem. Very gratifying to watch.
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I like how you play with words, reflections, and shapes here, Robbie!
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Thank you, Marian.
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I like these, Robbie, especially your first poem about the reflection grasping the heartbeat of the sun – that’s terrific!
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Thank you, Barbara. I’m glad you like that verbal image 😊
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great photos to go with the words, or perhaps great words to go with the photos…
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Thank you, Jim. I saw the sunrise, and took pictures to go with my thoughts on it 😊
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nothing like catching a sunrise…
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That odd-shaped spot of sun is beautiful, as though fire surrounded it. Lovely poem to enhance the experience.
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Thank you, Jacqui. The early bird definitely catches the photographic worm. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Robbie, this is perfectly lovely. It conjures so many images with so few words. Hugs on the wing.
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Loved the imagery to go with the lovely poem Robbie 🙂
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Thank you, Debby.
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Lovely words to go along with a stunning picture, Robbie. Thanks for sharing them!
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I am glad you enjoyed these, Teri.
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I loved that the sun wasn’t round. Nice job, Robbie!
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Thank you, Cindy.
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