The Parktown Prawn, also know as the African king cricket or tusked king cricket, is found throughout Southern Africa.
According to Wikipedia [and my own experience], “A large specimen may grow to be 6 to 7 cm (2.8 in) or more, with long whip-like antennae extending to about the same length. The exoskeleton is orange to light brown, with darker brown or black stripes across the abdomen. The conspicuous markings probably are aposematic in effect. A large specimen can jump more than a metre high.”
Charli Mills over at Carrot Range gave the words “Wet Ink” as her flash fiction challenge this week. This is what came to mind:
“She sat working on her laptop in the dark. The power was of and she had a deadline to deliver on. The lights suddenly came back on and she looked up. Perched on top of her screen was a huge Parktown Prawn. She shrieked and jumped backwards. The enormous bug jumped to the floor and scuttled towards the doorway. She grabbed a heavy book and brought it down on the creature. When she lifted the book, she saw it was dead. A viscous black substance oozed out of its crushed body. It looked like it was leaking wet ink.”
You can join in Charli’s challenge here: https://carrotranch.com/2018/01/12/january-11-flash-fiction-challenge/
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Wow, Robbie never knew about the history of this African Prawn. A good read, thanks.
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Thanks Kamal, they are huge and scary looking.
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Yes for sure from the way you described Robbie.
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Ha ha! Amazing! Definitely something imaginative for the words ‘wet ink’ I love the imagery!!
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Thank you, something a bit different.
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Your story is so well written and vivid that I can literally see the oozing black wet ink leaking out of the Prawn. Uhh, I would be scared to kill a black widow!
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So would I Miriam.
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You writing is excellent, Robbie!
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Thank you, Miriam, I really appreciate your comment.
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Er… ew! That is rather disturbingly vivid!
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Yay, that means it worked well. Hugs.
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It definitely worked Robbie!
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the poor thing.It probably couldn’t inflict a bite if it tried. It’s only crime was being born ugly……..to us at least.We are always scared by what we do not know.
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Thanks Wayne, we don’t actually kill them. I catch them and put them over the wall into the neighbour’s garden [tee hee]. They squirt running black inky stuff when they are scared so that is how I know about it.
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I was reacting to the poor thing being crushed.I wonder whats in that black ink?
Going to read up.
thanks Robbie
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it appears that black substance is used to attract a mate.A scenting liquid used to get a date.
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Thank you for looking this up. I would never crush one so don’t worry this is fiction. Most interesting.
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Aaaaahrrggghhh! YUCK and double YUCK! A Great story Robbie though nonetheless! 🙂
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I have never actually killed one, Judy. I don’t like to kill creatures but I have seen a dead one.
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I had to double take that image when I saw it in my reader. I thought…no way is that one of Robbie’s creations. Nice piece of prose x
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No, it isn’t a creation, Shey. I only make nice bugs. Thank you!
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Oh yes. I thought that. I was worried about you when I saw it come up but then I read the story xxxxxx
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Ooh, Robbie. As much as I am against killing little creatures, sometimes I, too, make exceptions. I love prawns usually, but I wouldn’t be too keen on this one – especially on my computer screen! Thanks for the education as well. I hadn’t heard of this one before – or of the word “aposematic “. Well done.
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Thank you, Norah, I am smiling from ear to ear.
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That’s better than screaming! 🙂
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I’m not a fan of insects so I would freak over one of those. Loved the line about oozing black ink.
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They are quite scary looking, Mae. Thank you for your comment.
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Had to finish reading while standing on the table. !!!
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Ha ha, I am glad this piece had the desired effect.
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* making my icky face * that’s a compliment, as your tale gave me the willies
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Something a bit different for me, Annette. I am testing my wings with these challenges.
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Arrgh Poor Bug.. to have the weight of words come down like a ton of bricks. Great write Robbie. 🙂
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Thank you, Sue. Don’t worry I have never killed one, it is fantasy.
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I know, lol… but your description just oozes in reality! 🙂
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OK, do NOT let the South Africa tourist bureau know about your post.
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Well, at least they are not poisonous, Jacqui. Just big and scary looking.
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I think I’d jump out of my seat too! In the US, we eat prawns, but I don’t think I’d eat that! 🙂
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No, you definitely wouldn’t want to eat these. They are not related to prawns at all. They are actually crickets. I wouldn’t mind them at all except that they squirt this horrible back stuff – Yucky!
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Like… wet ink. 🙂
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Poor little critter (although should that be poor huge critter?) And you said you could not write evil Robbie!!!!
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Well, that was with regards to people, Paul. Giant insects that squirt black stuff are a different matter entirely.
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Fair enough! Px
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Scary and vivid. Well done.
Prawns in the states are shrimp, not jumping bugs.
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Thanks, Susan. We also have sea prawns here in Africa. They come from Mozambique. These are actually giant crickets and are not related to prawns at all.
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I will stick with blizzards, thank you very much!
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Ha ha, Elizabeth, they are not that bad. We also get huge rain spiders. Do you get those in the US?
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Not in New England fortunately.
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Yuk. Seriously, yuk…
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Geoff you are so funny. Africa is a wild place, we have lions, cheetahs and giant crickets [smile]. Luckily, it is only the giant crickets that walk the streets.
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I love cricket. I love the idea of giants playing cricket in the street. Yes I think that might catch on. It could be a thing. Vincent Van Der Bijl should be in the team. He was a giant.
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I HATE parktown prawns and have been known to leave home if one has been in the house. Thankfully we don’t get them here.
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Spoken like a true South African, Tandy. What is happening with the water situation?
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It’s dire but hopefully we will get the desalination plants up and running soon.
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Oh, yes, I would shriek, too! Perhaps scooting it out the door would suffice next time. 🙂
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This is fiction, Charli [smile]. I have never killed one. I catch them in a box and put them over the wall.
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Ha, ha…whew!
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I have nothing against insects – but my son would have beat you killing this one hands down. Hates them.
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Thanks, Teri, I don’t actually mind insects much either. My husband is the one who hates them.
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Good, Robbie! Creepy and good
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Thank you, Jennie.
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You’re welcome, Robbie.
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Thanks for the share, Michael. I am sure you don’t get giant, scary insects like this where you are.
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