Kayla Ann is holding a poetry contest. You can read about it and enter here: https://kaylaannauthor.wordpress.com/2017/10/21/poetry-competition/.
I love to write poetry and pour my thoughts out onto paper. Sometimes the words just flow out of me, like this poem that I have written for this contest.
Choices
Who would ever think
that a choice
could be so hard to make
What to do
swirls around and around
pros jostling for attention
among the cons that float
to the top of my thoughts.
Why do I want to change
you may ask?
Life is so very short
Your time in the light
is limited.
It is vital
to make the most
of what life has on offer.
Some choices
almost seem
to be made for you.
Others are so much effort
you sweat it out
trying to do the right thing
keep your priorities on track
and not live
to regret
a wrong choice made.
by Robbie Cheadle
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The “default” choices are really the worst at times!
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Yes, but at least then you can deal with them and make a plan. I hate the ones where we labour over them for weeks.
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Choices are so hard to make, and knowing if it’s the ‘right’ choice is the toughest! Great poem Robbie!
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Thank you, Ritu. I am mulling over choices at the moment.
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Hope you choose right then Robbie xx
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Great poem and very true.
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Thank you, Kim
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Choices. These things that afflict every moment in life sometimes. You capture that brilliantly here x
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I am glad you enjoyed this poem, Shey.
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I love the poem, Robbie. There are so many choices that we have to make; some can totally change everything! 🙂
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Thank you, Judy. You have made a good choice with your studying!
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Yes, fingers crossed, I will be ok! 🙂
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Very inspirational! I wish you luck!
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome.
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Splendid poem, Robbie and for sure a lovely choice and their words.
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Thank you, Kamal. Your kind words are always appreciated.
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Welcome Robbie.
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So true it is good to have options in life but sometimes the options are no options at all .
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What I never get right about poetry is where the line ends. Yours are perfect. Well done, girlfriend.
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Thank you, Jacqui. I am lucky, my poetry stops at the end by itself [sorry, if that sounds weird but that is how it feels].
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Great poem, Robbie. Did you enter it in the contest?
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Hi Mae, I am going to link back to the contest now. I was in a rush this morning.
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Awesome! Good luck, Robbie!
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You nailed it, Robbie! Beautifully written, poignant piece. Thanks for sharing. 🙂
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Thank you, Natalie. I do appreciate your support. My mom doesn’t understand why freestyle poems don’t rhyme and says haiku’s and tanka’s just don’t make sense.
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Too funny, Robbie! I hear that too. 🙂
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Words of wisdom, thoughtfully presented. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for letting us know about it.
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Thank you, Annette. I hope that you also enter.
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I am considering it, that’s for sure
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It’s still a choice even if it seems we didn’t have to deliberate long or at all. Hopefully the regret turns later into joy in some unexpected way.
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That can also be the case, Frank. You are right.
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Simple and poignant. Even I️ understood ut😉👍
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Thank you, Steve.
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The content of this poem and the message is magnificent
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Thank you, Kayla Ann, I see a couple of my blogging friends are joining in your poetry contest.
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Thats so great! I’m excited to read new poems!
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You know Robbie, I have never pretended to be good at appreciating poetry but this is excellent. It really spoke to me. What I liked as much as the eloquently expressed thoughts was the way you broke up the free meter to capture the doubt & inability to reach resolution as new perspectives jumped into your head. It adds to the claustrophobia that happens when things are caught in our head. (It’s not called talking things out for nothing!)
The lines ‘swirls around – want to change’ constitute a perfectly symmetrical stanza but are a radical departure from what has gone before and comes after. It is echoed later with ‘trying to do- priorities on track’: but at this point it is more fragmented.
And that section is preceded by another shift in meter which tops and tails each other as a mirror image ‘Life is so – has on offer’. It creates the impression you are weighing up conflicting thoughts.
This is what composers like Handel and Mozart did : took a rhythmic phrase and reversed, inverted, echoed, extended and truncate it all for the variation of mood it produced. Michael Nyman wrote a whole musical soundtrack to Peter Greenway’s film Drowning by Numbers using only 4 bars of Mozart’s music with this technique. (Try Wheelbarrow Walk & Sheep and Tides on You-tube).
What you created is the disturbing gnawing sensation of indecision and the fragmentation that happens when things get caught in your head. It hits at a emotional level created by the rhythmic patterns that go beyond the words you use. That’s what I saw and that is what I appreciated.
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Thank you for your great comment, Paul. It is very helpful that you wrote down your thoughts and interpretations like this. I did intend for the poem to read as a thought process for a difficult decision and you have understood that, and the anguish and complexities involved, which I find hugely encouraging. Thank you again.
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Robbie, it worked really well. I always think hearing someone else’s analysis is really useful. As writers I believe we are often we are not aware of what we achieve or its effect on others because what comes out is instinctive- like a composer’s feel for rhythm and melody to create the mood. I suppose that instinct is the definition of talent.
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Yes, you have described it exactly, Paul.
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Well done, Robbie! 🙂
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Thank you, Bette.
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I always feel that there are no such thing as wrong choices. Sometimes doing what is right at the time is the only choice. Good luck with the competition.
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Thank you, Tandy. You are right, but it doesn’t always feel like that when you are making the choice.
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Lovely poem Robbie and so true. Life is about choices ….
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Thank you, Lynne. I suppose no choice is wrong but some lead to a rockier path than others.
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Sadly yes. At the time though, that choice seems like the right one to make, and only afterwards, it is realised that it was the wrong choice. I have often thought of life as a road leading to an intersection, do I take the left or right turn…only time will tell, which was the better choice. I have always thought that life is a gamble. Sorry for my ramble 🙂
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My thoughts exactly, Lynne.
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A profound poem, We do indeed need to be aware of our choices, and learn each one we are responsible for.. Wonderful poem Robbie 🙂
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Thank you, Sue. I am glad you liked this poem.
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🙂
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Nice one!
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Thank you, Jay
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Well said, Robbie… And so very true! Hugs
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Thank you, Teagan.
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This is an inspirational read.. please keep it up.. 😀
I am new here. I have written a few poems. Please do give them a read. I hope you will like them. Please share your valued feedback.. 😀
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Thank you
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So often with choices to be made yet so little time remains🌷
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You are right.
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